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The tent did not look right at all to Chou. It leaned towards Irisu too much.
Big sis Irisu, what are you doing? He asked as he watched the two others fumble with tent poles.
Cant you tell from looking? Get over here and support the sides! Seto growled.
Chou ran over to Seto and quickly shoved a pole under the tarp, he ran over to the side that Irisu was holding when suddenly the tent collapsed on all three of them. After a short period of cursing and fighting with the fabric, all three of them managed to crawl out from under the tent.
Seto glared at the two others. Seriously, you two. As Konoha trained chunnin, isnt putting up a simple tent beneath your abilities?
His words fell on deaf ears as Chou was busy staring at Irisu, who had fell on top off him under the tent previously.
Um
Big sis Irisu? Did your breasts grow bigger? Chou suddenly blurted out.
My breasts? Irisu blushed and looked down. Yeah, I guess they sorta did.
Dont let him say things like that! Seto hit Chou and yelled at Irisu.
But hes only a little boy. Its cute. Irisu smiled.
Hes 15! Seto sighed. Hes only two years younger than us! Seto pointed a tent pole at Chou.
Hey, Team Bakado. What are you morons doing? A young girls voice interrupted the argument. They turned to look at Lyketna Namida, the daughter of the woman who had hired them to act as escorts to the Village of Eight.
Miss Lyketna. We were just putting up our tent. Is everything alright? Irisu quickly said as she saw Setos normally grumpy expression change to an elevated level of irritation. Chou, why dont you give Lyketna some candy and go play with her?
No, I think Id rather help put up the tent. Chou shook his head.
No. I think you should go play with Miss Lyketna. Irisu said through a gritted smile and she began to take off a sandal to hit him with.
Fine. Gee, put your shoe back on. Chou walked over to the 10 year old girl and said to her, but Im not giving her any candy.
Like I would accept any from a pervert Bakado like you. Lyketna frowned and stuck out her tongue.
Its not Bakado. Its Sadako, Team Baka
Sadako. Chou told her and stuck out his own tongue.
Whatever. Worse bunch of bodyguards Ive ever seen. Lyketna sneered and walked away.
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When the sun rose the next morning, the small group was already moving on the road. Irisu ran back to the small carriage carrying Lyketna and her mother.
Miss Namida? How are you two doing, well probably reach the Village of Eight by noon. Do you need anything? Irisu asked as she watched the little girl sleeping in her mothers lap.
No, sweet girl. And please, call me Aya. Lyketnas mother smiled and continued braiding the sleeping girls hair.
Irisu ran back up to where her team mates were walking. Everythings good back there. Lyketna is asleep and her mother is doing alright.
I hope that little demon stays sleeping until we reach the village. Seto grumbled.
Unfortunately, Lyketna did wake up and was already causing Setos anger level to rise by the time they arrived at the Pal mansion in the Village of Eight.
A tall lavishly dressed man walked out of the mansion and greeted the travelers. Dear sister Aya, it is so nice to see you. He gave Lyketnas mother a kiss on the cheek. And Lyketna, youve grown so tall. The man hugged Irisu.
Uh
actually shes Lyketna. Irisu pointed at the bashful Lyketna hiding behind her mothers skirt.
Ah. Of course. Then you are the help, I assume? The man looked at Irisus fishnet shirt and short kimono, slightly dirty from the two day journey, with disapproval and made his judgments before she answered.
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Despite Setos objections, the group stayed in the mansion while Lyketnas mother handled her business with the man. As Irisu wandered through an enormous garden, she overheard angry voices.
Why did you bring that girl? Irisu realized that it was the man speaking.
Shell be turning eleven in a few days. Isnt it about time you took her back? The other voice belonged to Aya.
No. I cant accept her. She already looks so much like Chise. I dont doubt shell grow up to be just like your sister. If this is about money, I wont be blackmailed.
Money? No, shes your own daughter for sakes! I know Chises death was hard on you, it was on all of us but Lyketna deserves to know who her real parents are. Listen to me, Lyketna is going to find out someday that Im only her aunt, how do you think shell feel to know her own father doesnt acknowledge her?
Shut up Aya! Just shut up, I dont want anything to do with that
girl. Tell her whatever you want, but Ill never take back the child of that woman. The man spun and walked away.
Irisu knew she shouldnt have listened to their conversation. She ran out of the garden.
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Good morning Miss Namida, I would like to discuss something with you. Irisu approached Aya the next morning.
Of course. Shall we go someplace private? Aya smiled and they sat on a bench in the shade.
I know about Lyketna. I accidentally overheard your conversation in the garden yesterday, Im sorry. Irisu said.
Conversation in the garden, you say. Aya repeated sadly.
Is it
is it true? Irisu asked her.
Yes. Im not Lyketnas mother. Her birth mother was my older sister, Chise. Aya looked at the space between her feet.
And youre trying to send her back to
? Irisu asked, her voice getting strained.
Her father. Aya finished for Irisu.
A deep silence fell after those two words.
Why?! Irisu suddenly jumped to her feet and shouted. How could you? Isnt Lyketna important to you?
Aya looked into Irisus light blue tear-filled eyes. Of course she is! I love Lyketna more then my own life!
Then it isnt right! You dont send away people you love! Irisu stomped her foot.
Its because I love Lyketna. Look around you. Her father owns all of this land, I have nothing. He can send her to the best schools, provide her with beautiful clothes and give her a better future than I could ever hope for her. Konoha isnt where Lyketna should be, its here. Aya said in a emotionally choked voice.
Youre wrong! A girl needs her mother! You selfish person! Youre a mean cold-hearted witch. You dont love Lyketna at all! If you did, you wouldnt go away and leave her alone! Irisu knew that her words and anger were misdirected, and the person she really wanted to say those words to would never hear them. Tears continually streamed from her eyes and she rubbed them with the back of her sleeve. Embarrasment and frustration fueled another burst of anger. Her chakra began to cause fallen leaves and twigs to swirl around her feet. Dont give Lyketna away! You cant do that to her! Irisu suddenly stopped in mid-shout as she felt little arms wrap around her waist.
Stop it! Stop being mean to my mommy! Lyketna squeezed as hard as she could.
Lyketna. Aya whispered.
Mommy! Lyketna cried as she ran to Ayas arms.
When Irisu put out a hesitant hand towards Aya, it was grabbed by Seto. He shook his head and lead her away.
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We have decided to stay a little longer. Aya announced later that afternoon. My brother-in-law will provide an escort back when we return.
I see. Then we should be on our way. Seto said to her and his group.
Yes, please tell the Hokage I appreciate her support. And here, please accept this as a token of thanks. Aya held out a wrapped package. Its not much, some food I prepared and a silver coin.
There was no need for
Seto began to say, however Chou had already bowed his thanks, grabbed the gift with both hands and was stepping away. Yes, then thank you. Seto bowed and followed Chou.
Miss Namida, Im sorry. I said a lot of stupid things, Im really sorry. Irisu bowed as low as she could.
Irisu. I want to thank you for your strong words. I think I understand your feelings and am grateful for them. Aya bowed.
No. That is
Irisu began to say more but she noticed that Lyketna was glaring at her. Well, okay. Please take care. She turned to join her group.
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Without anyone to slow them down, Team Sadako reached Konoha shortly before sundown.
Big sis Irisu, youre really not going to tell us what happened back there in the garden? Chou asked Irisu again after they made their official report to the Hokage.
Nothing happened. Just let it be. Irisu sighed. Im beat, Im gonna head home.
Seto frowned. He didnt like to see Irisu sad but knew that Irisu would tell them when she felt like talking. Take care getting back.
Chou looked at Seto then at Irisu. Well, see you later. Wait up Big brother Seto, buy me come candy! At least let me hold the silver, please!
As Irisu walked back, she saw someone sitting under the tree behind her house. She smiled and quietly sat down next to him.
Shikamaru woke up from his nap and felt Irisus arms around his neck and wetness on his back.
Irisu, what are you doing? He asked her.
Please. Just for a little while. Irisu whispered.
What a bothersome girl. Shikimaru said and let Irisu continue to cry.














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